I've recomposed it, but left the original struck-through. That also gives some insight (to myself even) on my correction process; I don't like to simply correct the lnaguage, I like to try to recapture the moment.
Geez, I have a black roll-neck sweater, I like lattes and I now have a beard - somebody save me!!!
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It was late and a 10 second job...and you know I can't count to 5 properly.
Danger of purple
19 February, 2005 10:17
I've recomposed it, but left the original struck-through.
That also gives some insight (to myself even) on my correction process; I don't like to simply correct the lnaguage, I like to try to recapture the moment.
Geez, I have a black roll-neck sweater, I like lattes and I now have a beard - somebody save me!!!
19 February, 2005 10:40
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