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Friday, February 18, 2005

Haiku

Blog admins conspire
Readability questioned
In danger of purple


Blog admins conspire
Readability issues
The purple threatens

2 Comments:

Blogger Idiocrates said...

It was late and a 10 second job...and you know I can't count to 5 properly.

Danger of purple

19 February, 2005 10:17

 
Blogger Idiocrates said...

I've recomposed it, but left the original struck-through.
That also gives some insight (to myself even) on my correction process; I don't like to simply correct the lnaguage, I like to try to recapture the moment.

Geez, I have a black roll-neck sweater, I like lattes and I now have a beard - somebody save me!!!

19 February, 2005 10:40

 

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